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Friday 15 September 2017

fire!!!!

One day on a sunny afternoon there was this kid named harvey he lived with his parent’s. His parent’s left to a restaurant on there date night and they left harvey in charge.


Harvey was so bored he invited his friends from school to come over to his house. His friend’s jack ,tray and leo were watching a scary movie.They got hungry and tried to cook some food  in the oven.They left the oven for half an hour and went back to watch the movie.


Later on they were asleep snoring loudly.They smelt this smokey smell.The smoke alarm went on and they woke up. They went to check the food that was in the oven. When they opened the oven huge fire burst up.Everything started to catch a light from the fire.


Harvey called 111 .My ‘house is on fire  will you please come quick”said Harvey. ‘Will be there as fast as we could’’. By the time the fire trucks came they ran outside because things were falling apart into pieces.Is ‘everyone OK’’ said Harvey. ‘where's Leo’’. Said tray. Leo was still in the fire.


Harvey asked for help but no one even bothered so Harvey ,tray and jack went into save Leo. Leo was stuck in the room.He couldn't get out because something was blocking the doorway.Harvey went to find Leo.
He was stuck in his parents room


His parent called if anything was happening in the house.Harvey could not reach the phone because the fire was so huge.Tray went to get tools to open up the door. Jack went to get some water to pour it on the fire.Tray opened the door and got Leo out.Leo was unconscious because of the smoke.


His parent came and saw that the house was on fire.his parents got out of the car and went looking for harvey. Finally they found him with his friends.His parents was disappointed in him for burning the house down.at last the fire was gone and the house was teared apart.Harvey wanted to make it up to them by leaving them in peace and quiet to enjoy there day off.

By viliami ma'asi.

2 comments:

  1. hey viliami i like how you write your fire stroy

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